*While the writing in this ad is geared towards men, all services are available for women.
Most things in life come down to sales and marketing. With Online Dating this is especially true.
How you present yourself will determine what kind of response you will receive.
With an extensive corporate background in all aspects of Branding and Marketing
I have learned how to make any product shine its best and if necessary
appear greater than it actually is.
A cleverly written bio or product description both substantiates and differentiates
the item you are bringing to the market-place.
As a woman engaged in the Online Dating Process I have run across many profiles
that glare with unfortunate photo selections and written word mistakes that simply
put men into the “Pass Category.”
For those of you who are new to Online Dating and have been disappointed by a lack of response;
I can help you in all aspects of re-creating your online presence!
Editing Your Existing Profile // Writing A New Posting:
*To Create Your Best Presentation we will consult for an hour by telephone to garner a complete understanding
of your personality, interests, and relationship assets. Followed by editing your existing posting
or designing a new one that says;
"I am interesting, upbeat, a positive thinker, intelligent, others oriented, and an all around Great Guy."
*We will improve upon:
Incomplete Profile Sections.
Three word sentences.
“Too many to list” answers.
(And let you know what each of these say to a woman.)
*Correct spelling and grammar errors - so that you don’t look stupid.
“Someone who like to get some wind in there face.”
There are three errors in this sentence according to writing rules.
Can you see them?
*Delete all defensive verbiage, grammar errors, and misspelled words.
Example: “I’ve never being married before, get over it!”
*Eliminate sentences that scream;
"I have no money and I only want you to make my life better.”
*Omit victim-hood, negative story telling, and any references to "drama."
* We will address the mistakes that tell a woman
this man is not ready for a real relationship or commitment.
You may well not be, but why shoot yourself in the foot?
*I will help you avoid the Pitfall Phrases that say you only want to use a woman or conversely,
remarks that imply women are opportunistic and looking for Sugar Daddies.
(Why a substantial woman will avoid you after this remark and what you can do
in the selection process to keep this from happening to you.)
*Create broader character and relatability by increasing your interests beyond bicycles,
motorcycles, or favorite sports.
Did you know you have 3 seconds to make an impression or be passed by…?
When asked about my online dating experience I have often said to friends,
“The one thing I find most profound is The Sea of Sad Faces.”
It is actually astounding how a man thinks he can post a sad dog face
and get any attention from a woman….unless that woman has a
bleeding heart and wants to take in a stray. (~: }
The Importance Of Your Opening Photo: Marketing 101
There have been so many times I see men holding up a huge- cold- dead- wet- fish
for their opening photo. Yes women want a provider, as in hunt and gather,
but honestly this image does not create a warm fuzzy feeling.
Beware! A dead fish or deer actually creates a divide between the sexes unless your
main objective is to find a woman who loves to fish or hunt as much as you do.
This level of information is best found later in the profile.
Included in opening Faux Pas Photos are “Family Shots.”
We all know there are probably going to be relatives but who are you selling,
you or your family? It’s often too much information to process and subject to scrutiny,
unless your relatives are Movie Stars.
Also included are Golfing Group Shots. This type of photo is a great marketing disservice.
It’s too confusing for the viewer.
*Take the time to get three clear, recent photos of just yourself without a lot of clutter in the background.
Learn What Message Your Photo Sends: (It may not be what you intended….)
*Taking a “Selfie” while laying on a bed pillow, and why it is a Bad Idea.
*Wearing “Shades” in every photo…..why sunglasses are working against you.
*No photos at all.
*One photo taken at a great distance.
*A landscape or pet photo and nothing else.
*Holding a puppy in the opening photo.
*A photo taken 20 years ago.
*Standing in front of your Mercedes in all the photos.
*Not smiling in any of your photos.
*All of your photos are Selfies.
*Worse yet, your Selfie is half naked...and why you will be ignored.
Image Consulting Services ~ Are You Caught In A Time-Warp?
How you present yourself in photos (and in person) will influence ad responses
and get you to your goal!
Simple updates and grooming procedures can be the fresh start you are looking for
to boost your confidence and leverage your success in attracting a beautiful woman.
Women notice everything because they are often better at staying up with fashion
trends for hair and wardrobe.
Looking hot, hip, smart or stylish doesn’t have to cost a fortune.
These days a great pair of jeans or khakis topped off with a polo, henley,
or a button up shirt (not tucked-in) offset with a casual pair of shoes will
be all you need to pull yourself together.
*Refining your wardrobe selection can be fun and easy!
*Ask about Image Consulting Services For Home and Body~
*Finding the right way to style your hair can make all of the difference in the world!
My current client had a sweep-over that was his signature look for decades.
He now looks like a movie producer with shorter hair and his updated wardrobe
spells a new level of confidence and attractiveness.
If you are over 60 and still wearing a heavy gold chain, sport long sideburns
and a mustache, this section is for you definitely for you!
*Sometimes it takes an outside perspective and talent to create the outcome you wish for!
*Please email your phone number for a Complimentary Consultation and Pricing Quotes.
*If your needs relate to Technical Writing which encompass biographies, product description,
corporate messages, cover letters, concise sale presentations, or any type of content material
please request writing examples. Partial resume below.
I look forward to talking with you soon!
Partial Resume 2003 - Present:
Self-employed consultant working with start-up companies in all aspects of Marketing.
Strategically written bios, product descriptions, and cover letters dedicated to differentiate,
validate, and acclaim brands in any market place.
Communication facilitator offering guidance on how to improve interpersonal and work relationships
through proper dialogue, attitude, and self awareness. Methodologies available upon request.
Evaluating public speakers and sales representatives; refining their presentation with the goal of appealing
to a wider audience. This includes cadence, tempo of delivery, mannerisms, and wardrobe.
Mauk Family Farms
Created all Marketing materials and established their raw food line into Whole Foods and several Co-ops.
Medical Mattress Division
Consulted with Foam-Ex, FXI. Co-developed their product literature, support materials and clinical data sheets.
C&C Compounding Pharmacy
Created Marketing materials, company bio and influenced trade affiliations to ensure consumer confidence.
Kundalini Yoga International
Marketing Director, created their logo, brochures, influenced company image and branding.
Rewrote their corporate message and gave suggestions for their website which were implemented.
1988 – 2002 Allergan Pharmaceutical - MD Formulations
San Diego/ Orange County Territory Manager for a pharmaceutical skin care line. As a Manufacturer's Representative servicing the Medical Spa Division, my responsibilities included all aspects of Marketing; securing new accounts, sales, personally conducting regional education seminars, shipping, and account discrepancies. Over 450 accounts were accommodated monthly.
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